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Kleinfelter Syndrome 3

Page history last edited by William Etienne 14 years, 5 months ago

 

 

 Kleinfelter's Syndrome

By : Jake Halbert and Michael Etienne 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Karotype Kleinfelter's Syndrome... XXY)           

Comments (12)

rryoung@... said

at 2:03 pm on Oct 29, 2009

I like the clean front page -- nice design. Make certain to include links to external websites on your secondary pages -- you've got plenty of room to include 3 or 4 per page (at least). Videos and images work well too.

Tina Le said

at 10:38 am on Nov 4, 2009

I like how the pages had a diagram or picture so that we know exactly what is going on. For example: the title page shows the extra chromosome.

Tyler Lasky said

at 10:39 am on Nov 4, 2009

Overall, it's not bad. I feel as though you are relying on external websites by consistently linking to them for information. Ex. Under introduction, it would have been nice to have some history included on the page instead of just linking to another site.

Tyler Lasky said

at 10:50 am on Nov 4, 2009

I have recently woken up to the fact that I used to be an idiot. With help from friends and family i am learning to change my ways.
........sooooo, I would like to say that I have changed my opinion. the klinefelters project is OUTSTANDING!!!!!!! wow, it is definitely the best in the class. it had great content, depth, information, picture, videos and obviously the creators are great. MIke etienne and jake halbert are just amazing guys... all around geniuses. I wish i could be like them. I like to spend my time around these godly men because i hope that one day some of their greatness will rub off on me. I feel truely blessed in their presence. Just but reading their wiki i feel as though my IQ has increase 10 fold. I hope that they will hangout with me after school from now on because i dont have that many friends. Also if we ever do another project i hope to parteners with mike or jake because zack isnt skilled at anything and so our project (cystic fibrosis) sucked very badly. And zack smelled bad whenever we got together to "work" on our project (which wasnt that often becuase i would consider us to be slackers). Once again i would like to reitterate that this because is A+ work. It is second to nothing i have ever experienced.

Joshua Miller said

at 10:53 am on Nov 4, 2009

I liked it but it woulda ben better if u were to go innto more depth about the meiosis that causes the extra x to appear. pics are good but videos are better

Zachary McCormack said

at 10:58 am on Nov 4, 2009

Well William, I feel that this is average work. You lack depth and use many external websites instead of created pages to explain information. There are a good amount of pictures but no videos. I find it disturbing that you guys must steal another's password to receive a good comment. Its ok, not everyone can have a good project like cystic fibrosis

Tyler Lasky said

at 10:59 am on Nov 4, 2009

WOW THIS WIKI MUST BE REALLY GOOD IF MIKE AND JAKE HAD TO USE ANOTHER PERSON'S ACCOUNT JUST TO GET A GOOD COMMENT. WHAT DOES FRAUD SAY ABOUT THE CREATOR'S OF THIS WIKI..............................SEE YOU IN COURT

William Etienne said

at 11:05 am on Nov 4, 2009

lol... jk

Sara Adams said

at 10:07 am on Nov 5, 2009

thats interesting that one out of 500 will have the disorder....i also thought it was interesting that most people dont show any symptoms at all....

Isabel Wenk said

at 10:17 am on Nov 5, 2009

I like your discription of the causes of the kleinfelter syndrome but a picture would help to show visually what happens in each state of meiosis and where something goes wrong. I like the picture you have because it shows that both mother and father can be "reponsible" for the genetic disease because both egg and sperm can have two X or one X and Y.

Zachary McCormack said

at 10:17 am on Nov 5, 2009

Clean format that makes it fairly easy to understand. A few videos would have been nice as well as less of a reliance on external websites. I did find it interesting that Breast cancer is related to Kleinfelters.

Julie Swihart said

at 10:44 am on Nov 5, 2009

You did a great job of explaining the diagnostic procedure to test for Kleinfelters. It was easy to understand. Also I like how you listed some related disorders that Kleinfelters can eventually lead to such as diabetes or chronic bronchitus

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