Does the person just have stronger bones?

Your secondary pages are good - just make certain to include more in-depth information. Your first page needs a little more pizazz. Use colors, images, and videos to do this.

Very nice scale picture on the Effects and Symptoms page. It really shows how much denser and heavier your bones are with this disorder.

That picture of the skulls is almost unbelievable! It's really shocking to actually be able to see the difference between the density of the bones. Try swimming with bones like the ones on the right.

I like the pictures that you on Effects and symptoms page that show the bones and the picture of the lady with the disorder. It really shows a good visual on what it looks like and shows how much your bones are out of wack with this disorder.

The information is well presented, but I feel like the font makes the information slightly confusing.
Try sticking with a more basic version. (time new roman)

I love the pictures on your Effects page. They really show the problems some individuals could have. I also like the way you had some info, and then the pictures.

Your pages are very well put-together and are easily to navigate through. The pictures were shocking, and brought an emotion appeal to your wiki. The pages and pictures are easy to read, but you still sound good.

The opening title made my head hurt, honestly, but after that i really did like the project, especially the little note at the bottom that talked about van Berchem's syndrome and scientific developments that have spawned off of the study this genetic disorder.

The scale of the 3 heads weighs less than on Van Buchem head is very interesting on the Effects and Symptoms page. Also the rest of the pictures on that page explain the density difference of a normal bone and a Van Buchem Bone. The front page however, has too much going on with it. It gives me a headache when i look at it.

this is really cool. They probbly couldnt swim... the size of that jaw was insane! pretty acurate information but i had know idea that your ulna and your femur were actually rite next to each other

The pictures on the symptoms page gave a very good visual representation of the thickening of bones (jaw, ulna, etc). The picture of the patient with the expanded jaw, while being slightly creepy, makes it much easier to comprehend the extent to which the disease can affect a person.

Good job, and nice pictures. The effects page does a great job of visually showing the symptoms. The first and second pictures do the job nicely. I didn't even know it was possible to have that large of a jaw. It also is fascinating that people with van buchem syndrome can't feel do to nerve entrapment. That would be a very weird experience.

The images really cleared the disease up for me. If you had done just words, I would've thought that the skeleton was just very, very strong. But since you included the old woman picture and the scale picture, I have a sharper image of Van Buchem Syndrome.

It's nice to know that the diagnosis is as simple as an x-ray, sad to know that there's no treatment. I really like the picture of the skulls on the scale also. It gave me a clear understanding between the density of a normal skull and someone with Van Buchem's Syndrome.

i thought the pictures on the symptoms page showed very well the symptoms and some of the chracteristics that patients with van buchem syndrome. i thought some of the facts were very interesting about this syndrome such as that this disorder is most commonly found in in-bred families. also i have noticed that most of these disorders are specified with a particular ethnic group and the intro pagecstates that this disorder doesnt occur in one specific ethnic group.

This wiki definately went into a lot more depth thatn any ohter wiki i have looked at. The large amount of links were very impressive, you included so much information. The authors note on the home page goes into great detail of how research of this disease can help with treatment of other bone diseases like osteoporosis.